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As I walk down to the coast from my hotel, the sand, as white and pure as snow, extends along the whole expanse of the seashore. I hear the seagulls loudly shriek as they soar gracefully above. As I step onto the beach, the soft, warm sand squishes between my toes. My nostrils detect the sweet lotion mixing with the crisp breeze off of the ocean. When I near the water I hear the crashing waves collide against the shore with their relaxing, rhythmic splashes like smooth jazz. Stepping into the water, I feel its cool touch envelop my legs and slowly rise up my body as I wade out farther into the sea. Plunging under the surface, I taste the bitter salt of the ocean in my mouth and rise back to the surface. While the sun leisurely sinks into the ocean, I see majestic dolphins leap out of the dark blue water and dive back in as if silently saying farewell to the gorgeous day.
I did this for my English class and thought i would share it. thought it was pretty good.
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Natalia7348 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013
i thought it was very beautiful.
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Van1712 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2010
totally awsome
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dyserae Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2009
its good. very descriptive. i liked it[link]
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